Just every verse I write is better than the previous one.
I think I’m getting better and better.
And this is a sick gfunk beat.
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I thought I was getting better. But it turns out they were talking to the guy standing behind me.
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Very, very good, @Jonnybegood. Just as good as any other rap song I’ve ever heard. I like the combination of piano with rap vocals. It’s quite original. And this is a lot coming from me because I am not a big fan of rap music.
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Nicely done!
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Very good @Jonnybegood!
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Love it!
Some Childish Gambino vibes from this. You’re really talented 
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I like your style of music
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Wow thanks everyone I forgot I had made this thread almost I wasn’t sure if it was an old bumped thread.
You are good!I don’t listen rap,but this is really good.
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You guys are too kind!!
I feel there’s some room for improvement but the beat is yeah awesome and everything else I’m doing is improved.
Is it your voice.Sounds open.
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Yeah it’s my voice. As I get healthier, my voice sounds better. People tell me I have a good voice but when I first started this I hated my voice. One day I will have my flow, delivery, lyrics much improved from this and I will work on getting higher quality songs I think it could be alright one day to share with people.
It’s starting to come together. This was my main endeavor since I was 22. I’m 28 now.
That’s what I wanted to say.You’re voice is brave.There’s no illness in your music.
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