Not my final draft. I used a pop filter and Changed some of the lyrics. But I like THIS rough draft
https://soundcloud.com/jonjames1/mathematics
@anon84763962 you like mos def right??? I gave jadakiss props in this song but I think he’s racist and that’s no good 
You said in the song that you made a deal with the devil ! 
A little pact. And you wonder how I got so damn jacked
Some say I’m cocky. U would be too if ur flow wasn’t so choppy, sloppy, they just can’t stop me…you’d be better off not even trying to copy. 
math remastered!
https://soundcloud.com/jonjames1/losers
Actually this is better
Mathematics was written 5 years ago…I realized my old raps were more “tell a story” but weren’t as abstract or diverse or written uniquely, to flow differently. Like 2 years ago they were very Abstract and poetic but not “cool”. I’ve improved a lot lately as my mental health gets better. I thought I had digressed for a while but now I’m starting to improve again. I have much more subject matter now. Most important thing is to improve the flow. I realized that’s what makes someone “stand out”. The flow… many people can make good lyrics. Many people can flow. How many ppl can do both??? Famous/legendary people.
And you gotta have your own style which I think I naturally do…I’ve heard this rapper Chris webby. He tries to be Eminem too much. That kid went to my high school btw…
I’ve improved soooo much since I made an album in September in terms of “sound” and “flow”. I wanna scratch that album so no one has heard it so I could recycle some of those lyrics when I make my first album 6 years from now!!! When I’ve built my own studio 
Improving every hour
https://soundcloud.com/jonjames1/derek-jeter
I really like the beginning
Then it gets kinda off topic
But still tells a story and flows well and voice good and beat great
chew got it chew… that’s better than eminem to me
that’s some heartfelt ■■■■ dude… quality
Thank you You the man @Azley
nah man you got some beautiful craft there!
I’ve improved a lot in the last couple days…its amazing how far a little bit of effort will go. I kind of gave up for a while but time improved me a little bit so now I’m trying harder and the improvement goes way faster that way…
https://soundcloud.com/jonjames1/jazzy-jew-from-the-new-schoo
Feelin inspired
Second verse is much better than the first…
I’ve found that this really works… I’ll give myself months at times to just let the mind sort out its confusions.
I’ll also say that your typing has improved.
Dude you keep chewing at your ■■■■ there yankee… It really does seem like it could go somewhere.
I think you’d enjoy this
Yeah I’ve heard it I like it
I had a dream last night I made a song in my dreams.
I rap in my sleep
I got a gap in my teeth
I laugh at the beast
I map out the feast
…
WOW! Great lyrics, poetic, deep! Your voice is nice to listen to, too!
It really blew me away! How to promote you? You need a venue in real life! Do you perform in real life? Can you? I can see it now: the chew tour, chewing up the lyrics and spitting them out like little bullets!
I’ve only performed poetry once irl. Not many venues around here. I have a plan to practice a couple more years, save my money buy a studio. Then make an album and music videos. I just got a job so I figure in a couple years I’ll be able to afford a studio. Thank u it means a lot 
https://soundcloud.com/jonjames1
Jazzy Jew from the new schoo is the other song I made last night. The second verse I really like. The beats better on Derek jeter but still good on this.