Dang @Jonnybegood you’re rhyming has gotten pretty awesome. The beat is tight but I think these raps would be better suited to a different beat. Still sounds cool man.
I felt a different type of emotion from this beat when I rapped it. It felt good
And practice definitely equals improvement 
You did good too. Maybe It’s just me. I dig jazzy beats.
The beat is pretty awesome too. I dig funk.
I thought the rhyme schemes were pretty unique in this one too. I definitely used some new ones in this.
Words are on point. Work on tightening up your delivery and you’ll be Golden. You’ve definitely gotten better, though. Keep practicing.
You’re pretty awesome yourself SpaceInvader.
Nice, I liked it.
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