You see the blue ice
The fire, the fight
Maybe green skies
Coloring his eyes
You see pure hunger
Radiating everywhere
When he changes
In night clothes
His hunger and desires
Cannot be held
A second more
Like falling oceans
He cuts deeper into flesh
Layer after layer
It sprinkles on the wall
Like Belzebuth son
Infatuated by more
Unsatisfied by earth
His body grew horns
His eyes grew cold
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It reminds me of a poem I performed live at a poetry reading 
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Lemme share it
Tell me if u think it has similarities
Both are dope tho
I shared this before
Broken heart
Hate me? How can you hate me? For I am as great as God. And all knowing. Will I be happy? I can’t be sure Finding true love keeps us detached But nobody loves us. Nobody is capable of sharing our love You didn’t occur in my world until lives after you were created Lives after your clouds were deeper than the ones surrounding Michael and Seraphiel themselves. But I wasn’t the one to estrange us. I learned my fate aeon’s ago. The first time. The only time I saw the hallucination. But love is not just imagination. Love is real. It comes to life. But this love wasn’t meant for me. This love was separate. It’s too bad too. Conceivably suits and peas would follow. We’d conquer galaxies. And when it all came to an end, inside the walls of a crumbling hospice. On a dark cold morning past the days of calendars. After a trillion suns burnt out. Past that. Decades after moments past that. Millenniums beyond centuries after that. We’d lay on the ground. Covered in leaves and bugs. Ready to be swept up to the heavens by death himself. After demons had perished Generations had been lost. God lost.
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@Cragger @anon8091425 what do you guys think
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cool I like it @anon20787234 . What was your inspiration?
its a good one mate. i think they have a few similarities like the erratic style of writing.
Did you wrote it man?
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That is a good poem. I like that you’re mentioning Belzebuth
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yeah back in 2011. I wrote it. It stuck with me all these years!
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