Actually wrote some poems last night

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Hadn’t written any for a while. Sometimes it feels good to express emotion in that way.

Here they are for any interested.

1.I don’t understand
Death
The sensation that the one that died
Took a part of me with them
I did not know existed

The aching pain
Felt in that newly formed gap
An emptiness that cannot be filled
But rather becomes covered with scar tissue

Grief
For the loss of anything
A childhood, a perceived self, a loved one, a time, a mind
A terrible feeling you want to get rid of but don’t know how

Father are you listening?
Are you there?
Or in the end do we really vanish into nothingness?
Are you as cold as they say?

It is my hope Father
You will fill these holes inside of me
So I will feel whole once more
And may sleep in peace and warmth

  1. In my dreams I am always running
    Endlessly traveling
    On a mission to return
    Home
    The only problem being
    That I haven’t a clue where home is
    That I haven’t a clue even WHAT home is
    So where am I running towards?
    I fear now that I am
    Lost

  2. Why doesn’t God ever speak to me in my dreams?
    Why does he never appear?
    Am I too far?
    Even when he answers my prayers
    He is not there
    Is it merely my belief that protects me?
    I have seen demons with my own eyes
    I have spoken with them
    I have felt them
    They are real
    Perhaps I’ve met the devil too
    Though that is hard to discern
    When every other demon refers to itself as he
    Why in my dreams have I never felt God’s warmth?
    I fear I am far from home
    Far from home indeed

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That’s very expressive stuff. When I read the words you wrote, they invoked a wide range of emotions. Really good stuff.

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Thank you, I was pretty emotional while writing these

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My favourite is ur second poem.

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