Unfinished? Unsure

Hint of the Sunrise, noxious and still. I lay down naked. The Sun flakes. And tossed into the throws. Plain and crying.

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Nice colors
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I like it. I like the colors.

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Thanks. Much appreciated. Not sure where I’m going with it all currently. So nice to get some feedback.

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oh man, so dreamy…wonderful work !!

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Beautiful work.
Hard to know when it’s finished. Its abstract.
i do see the hint of sunrise, some orbs/eggs something growing
The streaks behind her as is could be interpreted as wings or landscape RN.
I love the colors.

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Thanks alot. Much appreciated. Nice words. :slight_smile:

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Thank-you. It’s really difficult knowing when to stop sometimes. But was worried it was too subtle. Also my phone camera doesnt pick up detail that well. But thank-you for sharing your thoughts :slight_smile:

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beautiful work, and gorgeous poetry as well!

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