Poem: Tracing Angels

Daybreak seems sluggish, and reluctant to shine
I can feel Winter’s eyes upon me
It’s weighted gaze
Reserved for bad dogs, and children

Winter finally begins to release Her death-grip
And I see the promise of Spring
reflected in your eyes
As we hold our breath, waiting
With the patience of a saint
Tracing images of the Angels
In the new fallen snow

~ by Anemone and David ~
(@anon8091425 and @Cragger )

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Gimmey summer back :sob:

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I’m not in my best mood because it’s not snowing.

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I like this

1515

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Good poem! Cool that its a collab you guys were able to pack a lot of meaning in there

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Yeah, it’s been a lot of fun collaborating. I haven’t written with anyone in years, so this is kind of cool for me

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Simply fabulous, such a beautiful poem!

You guys are on a roll!

@Cragger @anon8091425

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Thanks @Wave !! The creativity seems to be flowing

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That’s a nice poem

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Thanks @Ribbon :slight_smile:

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@Jonnybegood tell me about it!

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You are looking forward to Winter I take it?
@Enlightenedbeing

Thanks @anon21849028 . That is one of @anon8091425 lines.

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Nope, sorry No summer, just winter now :grinning:

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Great poem! 151515

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Thanks @eighteyedspy23 !!

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Thank you everybody!

I’m happy to write poetry with you!

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How’s the beat coming

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I might have to do it at my buddy’s place, if he has time next week. My board isn’t talking to my computer for some reason, I’m going to try to get a new firewire cable for it and switch interfaces. Pain in the f****** c***

It’s comin’

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