Ethereal morning

Fall around all, allaying yester, rests under a lush dew,
Guise, the vale wise, a splash of glint and blush hue.
Laud we the bloom of day before the Suns brisk bend,
And wield the fields yield; O the simple hearts’ mend!

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That’s beautiful :blush:

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Thank you!! The sun, the dew, feeling good this morning…all things to celebrate!!

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:smile: great! Always good when we’re feeling good

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wow, it’s not easy for me to understand a poem in English as my vocabulary is a bit limited. Literary words are hard. But thank you for depicting such a beautiful image of morning!

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Sorry about that, @green5! I just enjoy learning and finding new ways to express familiar words. Thanks for the kind words!!

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I like poetry and I used to write poems in Chinese language. But literature in English is hard for me.

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Poetry is something I like as well! I try to keep writing, although sz makes it hard.

I feel you, Gir. SZ makes my writing difficult either. But I am still trying.

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Still trying!! Here’s to that!

Great poem gir!

Thank you very much @Goinggoinggone! Just my little contribution to the day.

Beautiful - Nice poem @Gir!

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Thanks @Wave! The kind words do my heart good!

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I’m weird about poetry,

But this is good. Believe me.

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I’m humbled. Thank you @wrongemboyo!

Great poem !!!

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@everhopeful, thank you, kind sir!!!

Think we have a future poet laureate here. Beautifully done.

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Thanks @Jimbob! I think feeling well comes and goes for most of us, and I try to do what I can when I feel ok - as we all do.