i have a question about the structure… I am experimenting with putting all my best writing of the last 3 years together and make one monologue…
The thing i am trying is merging my two best bits of work with a lot of other bits and pieces.
So - is it too much of a stretch for a paranoid runaway who is vulnerable and crazy, begging and etc, then gets back into hospital, has a lot of delusions and falls in love with another patient and then finds herself turning into a spider for several minutes… (guess where the second spliced in monologue begins).
How does that read for a first 45 mins of an hour? (still working on it.) (long way to go, especially if the most recent 10 minutes can’t be spliced in