I think it only starts getting good @30 seconds
Well that’s when it really heats up for sure.
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I guess they aren’t ready!! Maybe it’s easier to follow along with lyrics
Feeling good
Feeling fine
Feel like I’m drilling wood
Sometimes I’m asking why
Do I do it
Why don’t I just pursue a lit
Disposition
A calm condition
A calm state of mind
I’m jon and these days I’m fine almost all of the time
Got my cap so that makes Me the cat in the hat
I’m phat with the rap
In fact
I got a knack for this way that I’m in tact
Still
Jack and Jill
Fell down the hill
Because they mixed the pot with the pills
You went from have not to making deals
Have not just bought a meal or two
For you and your boo
But for you and the crew
This game that you do
For no two
Is the same
The terror or the pain
The error if you think I’m not insane.
I’m sorry babe
Maybe I gave
Too much
To just
Sit and rust
And collect dust
And I must have not gave a ■■■■
Since the beginning I’m sinning
Now I’m winning
Grinning wishing. I’d be earning
This is a warning
I wake up next morning
Saying it no longer feels so god damn boring
For I was snoring
Now I bring the glory
To this story.
The reason to my rhythm
Next season for it’s given
I’m living
This way
Pigeon
Holed
On a mission since I was 22 years old
Well maybe before
I just wasn’t sure
Of what
But with some luck of this
This nut
Now they just like what
Did you do
To
Be this way
Pre to the day you laid in a grave practically living like a slave. Look now it’s made. So nice. So even. So balanced. I’m Ice , I’m leaving. I’m Embracing talent. Now
Honestly this is something new. The other day I posted my song on a forum and a guy gave me a lot of advice. So this is my first song since then. I’ve also been taking lions mane. This is on a whole new level. I’m very proud.
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Sounds like Eminem in his old days. Good stuff @Jonnybegood
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What do u think of Eminem in his new days?? I’ve kinda grown to like it more. There were a few albums of him I wasn’t crazy about but every album had at least a few good songs It seemed.
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I’m a big fan of Em but I liked him more back then. He had some good inner rhymes which made him flow very good. Like MGK said, he just screams in the mic now, but his flow is terribly good. He used to be angry, but now he’s way too angry.
“The Way I Am” is a classic example of a crazy rhyme scene which just flows so nicely.
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Nice… picked up all the way through
Love the last several lines
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Your rapping is very good, but the track needs a chorus (hook). You should colab with someone (preferably a woman) who can sing the chorus.
Here’s Rihanna singing the chorus with Eminem rapping:
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