Not the best song I’ve ever made but my skills have improved a bit.
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Did you make that on your own or with someone else
Someone makes the beat. Puts it out for free. I do all the writing. And the vocals and the mixing.
I’m not the all arounded most talented musician in the world in terms of instruments. But I’m a bit out of element and making it work which I’m proud of. Getting better which is good.
You have a talent
I went to Chester a year ago and there was a young rapper putting his work out there and doing freestyle it was quite good
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Thank you it’s about practice makes perfect like anything else. I think anyone has the ability to be creative in someway if they develop their skill they’re passionate about. It was having schizoaffective that inspired me to rap, really, in multiple ways.
@Jonnybegood, good job. You might want to do what the big time rappers do and throw in a chorus of the title of the song every now and then. Just say: “Going to Hell” when you reach the end of a phrase to give the listener a break every now and then.
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Maybe I didn’t make the chorus distinct enough. Maybe I should redo it with your idea.
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@Jonnybegood, I love the title of your song by the way.
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Thanks @SkinnyMe
The song has really been helped by your suggestion. I can tell it’s good. Uploading the finished version right now to listen to it. And I took out the most triggering part which helps it’s stance a lot.
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@Jonnybegood, I think you should insert the title chorus or “hook” every four to eight phrases. But it should be more or less consistent.
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talented people are in all walks of life
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