I don’t know why I like this song. Second verse and chorus is lazy imo. But still think it’s an ok song.
Your music is great. You know how I know?
It makes, me want to sing too
check out the Mentally Ill Genuises. i met one of them ages ago and follow him on facebook.
Good job, @Jonnybegood
Thank you!!! That’s a really great compliment!! One of the best I’ve ever received!!
You’re welcome I really mean it.
I might have to make a recording myself one day.
You can do it. You do sing a little right??? Think I never sang or rapped till I was 23 and now 8 1/2 years later I can still pick it up ok and all. I mean don’t get me wrong I wish i started younger but it’s a skill that can be developed with practice and devotion. But you have an advantage if you’ve sang in choir or stuff. I did but never took it seriously. Or if you just have a good Voice in general. When I first started I figured my voice was biggest weakness now I think I just want my lyrics to be better the most
When I listen to myself singing I’m not usually extremely pleased with it. But… I just like singing when no one can hear me. It’s nice.
You honestly have a good singing voice though.
I don’t think I’m anything special, but maybe just for the thrill of it I should just scare myself a little lol
Unfortunately this situation is impossible really
Lmao.
Good luck with the lyric writing. I agree it’s just a matter of experience and practice.
I love how raw your stuff is though!
I’ve made some other good songs lately but it didn’t get many plays
Like flower
And talking to the moon remix
I’ve been writing by hand again not typing it I think it’s better
In flower and talking to the moon, you sound upset. In I don’t know why, your singing voice could use a drink of water. Is all rap about upsets? You’ve got to remember, I’m an oldtimer.
I didn’t think I sounded that way in flower
Maybe in the moon song I did! It’s ok I appreciate your honest feedback.
But in the moon song I was trying to emulate the original song. I did the same voice that he did. Best I could at least.
Flower would be considered “light” compared to most typical rap songs imo.
@PinCushion i made this one in the studio
What do you think
It’s inspired by many rappers. But 50 cent inspired the chorus I’ll say…
I like the lyrics. Good job.
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