I don’t know why I like this song. Second verse and chorus is lazy imo. But still think it’s an ok song.
Your music is great. You know how I know?
It makes, me want to sing too
check out the Mentally Ill Genuises. i met one of them ages ago and follow him on facebook.
Good job, @Jonnybegood
Thank you!!! That’s a really great compliment!! One of the best I’ve ever received!!
You’re welcome I really mean it.
I might have to make a recording myself one day.
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You can do it. You do sing a little right??? Think I never sang or rapped till I was 23 and now 8 1/2 years later I can still pick it up ok and all. I mean don’t get me wrong I wish i started younger but it’s a skill that can be developed with practice and devotion. But you have an advantage if you’ve sang in choir or stuff. I did but never took it seriously. Or if you just have a good Voice in general. When I first started I figured my voice was biggest weakness now I think I just want my lyrics to be better the most
When I listen to myself singing I’m not usually extremely pleased with it. But… I just like singing when no one can hear me. It’s nice.
You honestly have a good singing voice though.
I don’t think I’m anything special, but maybe just for the thrill of it I should just scare myself a little lol
Unfortunately this situation is impossible really
Lmao.
Good luck with the lyric writing. I agree it’s just a matter of experience and practice.
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I love how raw your stuff is though!
I’ve made some other good songs lately but it didn’t get many plays
Like flower ![]()
And talking to the moon
remix
I’ve been writing by hand again not typing it I think it’s better
In flower and talking to the moon, you sound upset. In I don’t know why, your singing voice could use a drink of water. Is all rap about upsets? You’ve got to remember, I’m an oldtimer.
I didn’t think I sounded that way in flower
Maybe in the moon song I did! It’s ok I appreciate your honest feedback.
But in the moon song I was trying to emulate the original song. I did the same voice that he did. Best I could at least.
Flower would be considered “light” compared to most typical rap songs imo.
@PinCushion i made this one in the studio
What do you think
It’s inspired by many rappers. But 50 cent inspired the chorus I’ll say…
I like the lyrics. Good job.
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