I’m working on a song, not sure what its gonna be about but its kind of a soft rock type deal. So far its just one verse, but Im really into it so far.
Anyway I sang some random adlibs over it to get the feel down, but since I suck at singing Ive decided I want to pass the torch to someone else.
Anyone think they can sing over this with the same general melody when its finished? I think it could be something special.
Again, dont mind my crappy vocals 
So I finished the song backing, and the first verse and chorus of vocals, let me know what you think. Tbh Im a little lost on what to do for the next 2 verses so Im open to suggestions lyrics wise as well
my sister teach singing and there are alot of rules too it breathing is best when you can hold the note, guy movement when making sounds etc i sing and some time suck and don’t sound the same in recording as on stage. it all in the way you follow through and feel .
Former choral student here.
I’ll give it a listen and work around the lyrics?
wait there are no lyrics, right?
do you have the instrumental??
[very confused]
@DrZen Thanks for the tips but I think Ill need a few years of training before my voice is good enough to do this myself lol
@anon10648258 Yeah sorry about that I kind of jumped the gun. The song is now called Wish I Could Sing and the lyrics are done now though, here’s the full song with my crappy vocals over it, I PM’d you the instrumental and lyrics so you can work on it if you want. Thanks btw 
I sing sometimes I’d be interested!? Melodically I like it!
Awesome! Ill shoot you a PM
Edit: I cant for some reason so here are the lyrics and instrumental link:
https://vocaroo.com/i/s0b7My2btFZw
Lyrics:
Intro:
Na na na na
Oh oh oh oh
I sure wish I could sing
Verse 1:
Driving back to my hometown
Driving back on home to you
Bringing something to read now
Cause there ain’t a whole lot to do
Wish I could quit you
Wish I could get through
All of my issues
But thats okay
I just couldn’t stand it
To catch you red handed
Your wish will be granted
But not today
Chorus:
I sure wish I could sing
I’d do almost anything
Verse 2:
Sitting out on the porch, how
I’d like to tell the truth
Finished the book now
Thinkin how Im wasting my youth
Then I remember
In early September
I couldn’t defend her
Anyway
Voice like an angel
Risen up from Hell
Under her spell
's why I say
Chorus:
I sure wish I could sing
I’d give almost anything
Verse 3:
Listening to the sound
Of people having fun
Looking at the ground
I thought youd be the one
I thought I would miss you
I dont need a tissue
Now I’m not with you
And I’m okay
Remember your voice though
Don’t have a choice y’know
Hearing the noise so
Now I pray
Chorus x2:
I sure wish I could sing
I’d do almost anything
I sure wish I could sing
I’d give almost anything
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