@Jonnybegood on the chorus, he did a great job so I rapped all afternoon and took a long lunch break at work to get this song done. Not sure if I like my voice or lyrics lol kinda insecure about that
But what do you guys think? Other than my vocal parts I think its pretty good
@zwolfgang and @Jonnybegood dang guys! Yâall did good! Instant fan right here!.. Iâll be looking forward to more music yâall do!
Nice work!
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@Twialine thanks! I have a super hard time writing raps, I second guess it a lot so much appreciated 
@GoldenRex Thanks so much!
Your parts are sick 
and it grows on me a lot. Canât wait till itâs a finished product
I like my parts too lol
Great work guys!
I think you are both starting to gel!
I donât quite understand the genre of Rap, but I like what Iâm hearing! 
âŚand I didnât find the track âcheesyâ at all.
It sounded legit to my ears.
Thanks @Jonnybegood, you did a sick job on the chorus! It inspired a lot of my lyrics and youve got a great voice
@anon39054230 thanks man! Its so much fun to rap, I just gotta practice some haha. Weve been making music together for quite awhile so Im glad you think we gel well
And glad you didnt find it cheesy! I suppose I just second guess myself a lot lol
I think insecurity is part and parcel of songwriting/ producing/ singingâŚetc.
Always questioning yourself. Is it good enough? Have I lifted this off of another artist?
When Paul wrote the song Yesterday, he went around asking everybody if he stole the song off of someone else. It was just so instantly catchy, he felt he must have burned another songwriter!
So relax, youâre in good company with your self-doubtâŚeven the Beatles had their share of insecurities!
Yeah thats so true. Ive been playing guitar since I was like 10 or 11 and I still feel insecure about it when around other guitarists lol
That reminds me, I wanna make a track with guitar but I cant, old laptop crapped out and it had all my plugins on it, but my internet is too bad to get them redownloaded to the new one (huge files)
Im itching to record someday soon tho
My next song is always gonna be my âbest songâ. Hungry mentality that gives me hope for creativity. Thanks @anon39054230 ! Your stuff I can tell itâs well crafted lifetime of practice type stuff. Gives me hope too peace!!
sounding good, guys =)
i like it. I really like the rhythm in the subs.
Good job! and the lyrics are good too.
Thanks @lekkerhondje! Glad the rhythm is cool, it was really tough to do the sub on this one for some reason, I tweaked it a lot
i also really love the melody⌠itâs great.
the rhythm in the sub is really cool yea.
Thanks yeah the melody is sick isnt it I had exactly what @anon39054230 said about the Beatles lol I thought it was catchy but then @anon10648258 showed me a song with like a suuuper similar melody 
Nobody can sing like you or @Jonnybegood.
Thatâs the art of creating music. You take your past influences and put your own unique stamp on it.
Yeah its so cool for that reason! Sometimes I hate it cuz I cant do it, been good for a bit now but for the past few months before I was too ill to finish a project
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