Speaking of poems----I rediscovered this one yesterday

its kinda a rap cuz it rhymes, kinda a poem

but very poetic overall

I named it Sunshine Daydreams, after a grateful dead song

i creep in the depths of the darkest night
a starless fight
the sharpest spike
to my delight
my enigma
got you familiar
with the billionaire
in your back yard
drinking himself to death like lorenz hart
and we guard
against the situation
because it happens on occasion.
but i pulled my tank into the police station
and let a beast loosen
a loose cannon
and im manning
got a nice tanning
from opening up in broad daylight,
hate to be so demanding
but i need your money, like 100 grand
and id be damned
i get slammed against the pavement
forced thru enslavement
it was so flagrant
foul
i worked thru the night starving like an owl
and thru the day like a water fowl
im too much of a scoundrel
vandal
bad example, hitting them at every angle
and its an ample
situation
with all the time im facing
in hell
i wanna be making a spell
in the mean time
lemme spit a mean rhyme
a mean prime time crime that puts a mime behind bars
sending him to mars
for experimentation

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Nice rap s.h.i.t…!!!

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Its too old for me to use. After a while they get stale and moldy and I cant use them anymore. So now its just a poem :slight_smile:

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That is so awesome!!

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It’s very visual in the use of words,

Cool!! :+1: