It’s called… ‘Out of Luck’.
I just sang it into my daughter’s phone. It needs some back-up vocal fill ins. But I think you’ll get the gist of where I’m going with this tune.
Be kind! 
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That’s pretty incredible! I loved it.
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If interested and you have the time. would you be keen on helping me produce this track?
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That’s cool. You got musicality in you dude!
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Thanks guys for the positive feedback!
I think if it is produced properly…with back-up vocals…drums, bass…etc. It might just be my best effort to date.
It really is about a guy who lives to the excess, then ultimately loses it all including the girl.
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Sounds really good, @Patrick
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It’s catchy @Patrick. I like it.
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I really like the song. Well done! @Patrick
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Thanks! It was just a rough draft of the song.
The poster known as Cragger has offered to help me produce it! We’ve been PMing each other. He’s a great musician with a unique voice.
When we come up with an updated version, I’ll post it on this thread.
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