Poem I wrote (unttitled)

Deserted situations left untouched
Minus one there is no rush
Cloudy eyes gaze at flies
Feed the infection make up lies
All I want is a little peace
Full of anguish tons of grief
Loose the battles thought you’d won
Sky is clear the melting sun
Sick and lonely
The children cry
See you soon
To say goodbye
Evaporate the inner channel
Listen closely to the babble
Lucky strike
Ride your bike
Alone at last
Yet out of sight

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That Was Really Amazing.

Such Sincerity.

Can You Write a Positive, Happy, Fun Poem (???)… . … :100:

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Thank you I appreciate that. I could try to write something positive, I guess whenever I write it goes dark for some reason

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Maybe You Need to Drink Fruit And Veggie Shakes (???)… . … :100:

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Maybee ahaha!!!

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I’m Not Kidding.

If One Contributes to The Death of The Innocent (As in Animals), It Could Cause Damage to Your System… . … :100:

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I see whrre your coming from

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I’m Not Coming From Anywhere.

Jus Speaking Truth.

Perhaps Change Needs to Occur in Harming Animals to Feed Our Self Righteous Ego’s.

Like What’s More Important, , ,

A “dark” Poem.

Or The Lives of The Innocent Trapped in Cages.

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Very awesome. I like the way the cadence changed throughout.

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Thank you I appreciate that…

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I like ur rhyming. Very nice

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Thank you!!! :smile:

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