If I was given a chance
To speak about mental illness
I would speak on it for eternity
If I was treated fairly
Like other polite human beings
I would get better asap
If I was cured of malady
With proper treatment and therapy
I would shout the happiest
Mental illness is like having a secret
That you can’t say
It’s not fun
But hey,
With the right attitude
Maybe there’s hope
And so at least a ray,
Of sun in sight
Just got to fight the fight
Until it’s out of sight.
Do what feels right.
Day and night.
Lol… Yes I’m bored and not particularly creative like you but I gave it a try.
That’s nice. It’s a good start. If you keep practicing or trying different ways to write a poem you can be a poetess… 
Thanks!!
Yea I should start reading poetry to get a feel for it.
I’m not good at expressing all my internal feelings that’s something I’d have to work on.
Thanks again. 
To be good at something take lot of time and patience. Even I don’t feel I am as good as I like to be. But need to enjoy the process and journey towards learning the skill. No matter how messed up it is and if people bring us down.
I think you did well.
Aw thanks Pretzel. I mean I did try to do freestyle lol
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