Thought some of these lyrics were powerful but slightly disorganized maybe. I think the beginning if better than the end. Thanks for listening.
quite something, did you make it?
Yes. Thank you. I’ve been feeling more clear lately. Usually my lyrics are way simpler but I feel this is more complex. I really appreciate your feedback it means a lot. I still have a long way to go I feel but I’m making improvements. Thanks.
yea… it’s strong. feels schizophrenia in a cool way
can only post 3 posts per thread - new account… this one’s more your style… Chew Vision replaced the old post
No don’t give up @chew!
Really good song.
You have a lot of talent.
I thoroughly enjoyed it.
From one musician to another, never give up. Your “Just Confused” track sounded well recorded. Did you record the lyrics in one take?
Took a couple takes. Btw I like dire straits too if that’s what your screen name is based on.