Improvise a poem

The dragon slain, I sheathe my sword
and straighten my quiver of arrows:
Good god, what kind of canyon’s this,
with sunlit crags above me round
on this blue morning, and above,
two daylight moons, Deimos and Phobos.

I found myself transported here
as if by means of a dream:
I needed only meditate
on Mars, beloved planet;
next thing I knew, my opened eyes
revealed Barsoomian skies.

My weapons were just where I’d left them,
ready at hand for battle,
and now the beastie’s bit the dust
the task remains for me
to claw my way up over the walls
towards a new adventure.

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Salute, cock and shoot
We’re troops ready for whatever
One of a kind, ready to die,
An army of delusional soldiers.

Pick a fight with us and you’ll regret it,
Who knows what we might do to you,
Walk a day in our shoes, see what we go through,
It’s true when they say we’re a little bit crazy.

Never mind our scarred minds,
Troublesome through a young eye,
Descendants from aliens in the sky,
We come together as one.

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“My Brother by Blood”

Incendiary, vicious, compulsive
Are the words I would describe
Your attitude; so repulsive,
I need a doctor to prescribe.

Skipping rocks by the river
Never understanding each other.
Trying to fish with chicken liver
Instead catching the wrath of mother.

Victimized, vindictive, hateful
Are the way I explain
My feelings about you, ungrateful,
Bound by a familial chain.

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Hey, Dude. Best one I’ve seen from you yet! So coolly daring and defiant. Thanks for adding.

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Whoa. Really like this, and “incendiary” is great. Fishing with chicken liver is the best. Is this about your real brother?

Thank you! And it is about my real brother, actually!

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You’re welcome. It’s very compelling. Do more!

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action poems can be good, but end up leaving the reader exhausted instead of inspired.

Depends on how up for a challenge one is. Also, who your hero is. I suggest you write a counter-poem to say it.

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So far i just have this opening. It took me about 3 hours and 12 coffees to come up with this…

“I love you more than pizza
Isn’t that kinda neat-za?”

(So? Whaddya think??) :slight_smile:

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I’d change “neat-za” to “meat-za.”

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To walk alone in madness plight
A sunny day as dim as night
For this battle need not muscles
But a psyche’s might

For it’s not a war of swords
But a struggle between wards
In one realm a sister
In the other an exister

So you throw lessons to be taught
But in delusion it blurs to naught
And as the intended stress becomes stronger
The crossover to the other realm grows longer

A balancing act between fiction and fact
Get me back, you’ve seen my wrong
Misguided thoughts, you couldn’t know
You’ve never danced my song

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I best liked the rhyme of “swords” and “wards;” took me by surprise. “Exister” is a great word. Also I like the longer lines to match “stronger” and “longer.” Nice poem.

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MY BUTT IS ON FIRE: Sometime last summer I adopted two cats, One is real skinny the other real fat, The skinny one’s white.The fat one is black, Not too long after, up wandered a stray, If I had been smart I’d have chased her away, But I’m a huge sucker for cute little cats, So I took her in. She’s mine, and that’s that. It’s been many months since I found this cute stray, But never got around to getting her spayed, With spring in the air, she’s been a live wire, She moans and hollers, “My butt is on fire!” At first I just say, “What a cute little kitty”, But it’s not all that cute, and I begin to take pity, But soon my pity has turned into ire, By her endlessly droning, “My butt is on fire!” I called the vet clinic and told the young man, “I need an appointment as soon as I can”, “What’s your cat’s problem?”, the doctor inquired, I promptly explained, “Her butt is on fire!” With urgent concern he penciled me in, And advised that I not let this happen again, He told me the price and I quickly agreed, If he’d put out the fire on her butt, GUARANTEED, He calmly assured me right then and right there, He’d put out the fire on my cat’s derriere, He explained the procedure, it sounded all good, So I drove to the clinic as fast as I could, I left the cat there for an overnight stay, And then picked her up at noon the next day, It all worked out great, and my cat is just fine, Now I can sleep and have peace of mind, So if you pick up a cute little stray, Please have your furry friend fixed right away, The springtime air affects one’s desire, And your cat will holler, “My butt is on fire!”

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A parody of “The Raven?” It’s good. “Quoth the kitty…” Thanks and have a great day :smile:

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