I’ve penned a little ballad for a female lead. I’ve got verse-chorus…verse-chorus…but I’m having trouble with the bridge.
Thought maybe I could record it and email it to any female who may be interested in working with me.
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The song is called…
Falling to Pieces
I touched the droplets on the pane
You always loved it when it rained
I crossed the hallway once again
And took your picture from the frame
Slowly change, hit the lights
Crawl into bed, hold on tight
And dream about you…without you
(Chorus)
I’m falling to pieces
What went wrong I don’t know
I’m falling to pieces
Finding it hard to let go
We wrote the last page of our lives
All those words we could not hide
So it’s the end, it’s goodbye
But you can’t say we didn’t try
Maybe things went too far
And I was no saint, but you played hard
I think about you…without you
(Chorus)
Bridge (To be determined)
Solo
Fade
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@anon10648258 buzz
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You have summoned me…hiya!
I’m in my grandmother’s farm right now. I can’t record the next few days.
Does this have a melody?? If so I would love to hear it!
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Yes. It’s all worked out on my guitar. My buddy has a little Recording Studio. I’ll try to lay down the track, and email it to you if you are interested. 
Hyia to you 
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Yes, of course! Thank you!
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@anon10648258 …Here’s a sample of one of my songs. It’s a baby lullaby I wrote when my twin girls were born. I’ve since written a bridge for this track, but I have yet to re-record it.
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That’s lovely!! When I wake up I’ll hear the rest of it (all are asleep lol)
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Wow!!! Wow!!! You need to making albums!!! Just wow!!! Your voice is beautiful and unique!! Don’t let them change your style either when you make it big!!!
Anyway, I would collaborate with you but I’m not really a singer anymore. I was in choir though from 6th grade and some in college. I also sang in my church choir.
I really don’t like the new singing style that’s out. It sounds unnatural. I’d like to hear more music like yours and I’m sure there’s a market out there for it.
Edit: Wow! I just listened to it again!!!
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I just sent the song to my daughter.
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Just lovely @anon39054230!
Really nice!
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I really want to hear the @anon39054230 + @anon10648258 version now. Nice !
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Youve got a great voice too @anon39054230! Im thinking maybe a duet is in order
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Gorgeous song, timeless melody, you are very talented.
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Yeah. We definitely need a collaboration.
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Thank you all for the kind words about the little lullaby I posted. It really gave me a pick-me-up!
@anon10648258 , I’ve contacted my buddy who has a home recording studio, and we’ll try to get something down over the next couple of weeks. Then I’ll post my new half/finished ballad on this thread for you to listen to…and perhaps you can come up with a bridge for my song.
Salright?
Salright!
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Awesome! I’ll look forward to it!
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