Rough Draft of Lullaby Song

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I’ve finally completed a rough draft of my baby song. I’ll be recording it more professionally later in the year. This is a version I just sang and played into my daughter’s phone.

Go to sleep, for tomorrow will shine
And you’ll always be mine
The world awaits your time

Go to sleep, tucked safe in your bed
Lay down your sweet head
May all your dreams be friends

Go to sleep (X2)

And if you cry I’ll hear your call
I will be there to comfort you
For every mountain you will climb
I’ll always be right beside you
There’s no need to worry
This promise I keep

Go to sleep

http://picosong.com/wRadC

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This is the other rough draft I’m working on…

Falling to Pieces

I touched the raindrops on the pane
You always loved it when it rained
Across the hallway once again
And took your picture from the frame

Slowly change, hit the lights
Crawl into bed, hold on tight
And dream about you
Without you…

I’m falling to pieces
What went wrong I don’t know
I’m falling to pieces
Finding it hard to let go

We wrote the last page of our lives
All those words we couldn’t hide
So it’s the end, a sad goodbye
But you can’t say we didn’t try

Maybe things went too far
And I was no saint, but you played hard
I think about you
Without you…

(Repeat chorus)

http://picosong.com/wRHtb

@YeshuaServant,

Perhaps you could steer me in the right direction with the bridge? I don’t have one yet, and wondered if you could toss out some ideas for me! :slight_smile:

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Man these are both great. You have such a soothing voice man. I can hear your stuff being in the soundtrack for movies and stuff. Very good! Make a soundcloud account man, I’m telling you!

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I don’t know man, I wouldn’t want to even touch it because it sounds so good right now, I think it should be you who figures it out, I’ve been in this scenario before but opposite sides and never understood until now… it just has to be you. lol. I know it’s gonna come out great though.

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