A Poem: World

No matter how I’m feeling
The world just
Does it’s own thing,
A revelation for sure.

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Reading that poem triggered an old memory of when I was young and going through a terrible loss and it felt like the entire world was moving and I was frozen in one spot.

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Great poem.

It makes not a jot of difference to the world if I am in it or not.

Life is simply an experience, be it good or bad.

Not caring about my significance makes my life easier.

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I saw a FB post that made me think about this further when it posited that I could have chosen this life experience and its difficulty level.

This proposes that it is not down to god or karma etc so there is no one to blame but myself.

The notion that I chose this life also implies that there is something else at the end of it.

Interesting stuff to ponder.

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Thank you for inspiring me to write a poem/song of my own on these things.

It wiill proobably be in my next trip hop tiune.

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do you want to see it? @everhopeful

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I never wanted the night to end. And then I went to alaska. I never wanted the summer to quit. But then it fell around me. The winter was rough. But spring came and wasted all away. I never knew.
I was moving. But I watch came and took that all away.

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A ‘revolution’ for sure! :wink:

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This is how I feel about my neighbors. Im always seeing them walking around outside walking their dogs and what not and i always think they must live the most normal life.

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Yes, post it below :point_down: !

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Here ya go!

I Chose this!

(Verse 1)

Next level thinking

Is pondering the notion,

That I sat in another dimension

Waiting on a cyber punk operating table.

Scrolled through a tablet

And chose a life patch

With little hesitation.

(Chorus)

I now know I underestimated

The trials and tribulations

Integral to this life,

Difficultly level one million.

(Verse 2)

Knowing that I alone

Chose this incarnation

I can stop blaming god and others

As excuses for my limitations.

(Verse 3)

It is on me

Not a Hindu goddess,

Or Buddhist karmic fluctuation.

I chose this

It was my decision.

I can blame only me for the choices I made

At the beginning,

In the heavenly cybercafé,

Or alien civilisation.

(Verse 4)

Life is simply an experience

Jumping levels of graduation.

Be it good or bad,

Opting out is not in the equation

(Verse 5)

Sit back and observe

I am of no consequence.

Ride it out in full,

To wake up once again on the operating table.

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Very good ! Impressive stuff! :clap:

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