A poem about love

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(It’s not very good, but I hope you enjoy it)

While my world is dark,
And there’s no sign of light,
You come into my heart
To tell me it will be alright.

Whenever I can no longer rise
After I fall,
I look into your eyes
And I can stand after all.

You’re the beauty in my earth;
The sunrise in the dark,
You make my life have some worth,
Because in my heart you’ve left your mark.

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I would say that sounds like love to me.

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Many people have different ideas of what love is, so it’s nice that you agree with my version.

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I like it. Thumbs up

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I like it. It is good.

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Wow, I wish I had somebody like that in my life!

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Thank you, I’m glad you like it.

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Yes, it is great to have someone who always brings you joy and makes you the best version of yourself that you can be. I hope you find someone like that for yourself :slightly_smiling_face:

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Not bad at all :heart:

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Good one! Just what I need.

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I think there are many people in the world who do not believe in love. Then there are people who fully believe in love and sing about it in so many popular rock songs on the radio. So love is for some but not others.
I do believe in a need to grow as an individual or else love in a relationship may not work. It may end in a divorce.
We have to think some about love. Do you think “Love is blind?”
I have been fortunate that my family believes in love for one another, for a life-time. That means my mother, father, and brothers.
Perhaps love is like a wheel, you get it, then you have it to give back to others.

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Thank you! I’m glad you like it. I wasn’t sure if people would, so I’m happy that you do.

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Thank you! :slightly_smiling_face:

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Yes, many people do not believe in love at all. I’m glad you have a family that believes in loving each other forever. My parents got divorced when I was a young age, but many good things have happened to me since then that might’ve not happened had they stayed together.

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everyone is different
but love is universal
like the poem!

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Nice poem @redanne.

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Thank you :slightly_smiling_face:

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I like it, would make a nice song maybe.

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Good work… i almost felt love in me.

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Thank you, I love writing songs as well, so maybe I could turn it into a song. It would be a pretty short song though :smile:

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