Wilderness (a poem)

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So I wrote this when I was in a little depressive funk not too long ago. Feeling somewhat better now, just kind of lonely.

Vast and immense

Cold, tired, tense

Darkness rapidly approaching

Sinking, drowning, choking

Trying to survive

Feeling barely alive

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I like it. Good job. :hugs::hugs::hugs:

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Thanks! 15151515

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That is a vivid explanation for someone barely alive…

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You do a lot with just a few words here. Very intense. Nice job!

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Really nice poem probably my favourite I’ve read on here, it’s short, simple, and to the point

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Thanks y’all. 1515

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very clear what you were going through. good!

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