Poem, Surviving

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we are surviving
stuck in our dance
and the music plays everyday
and some voices are singing by chance
a melody, and we are sick as it plays

we are surviving
we will not eat
and the food comes to the table
and a voice gets louder to compete
a chant, and we are sick and not able

we are surviving
we’re trying to sleep
and people wake us with their dreams
and the voices run restless and deep
a river, and we rush helplessly by it seems

we are surviving
yet dying somehow
and we’re not saying goodbye
and the voices keep whispering now
a promise, and we’re not fighting as we slowly die

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I try to live but sometimes I have to settle for surviving. Nice one @Leaf.

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Very nice @Leaf!

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** snap ** SNapp ** Snapp **

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I just had some similar thoughts about dying. We do have similar vibrations here.

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Hold on don’t hurt yourself you’re valuable. You are worth more than Gold friend.

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oh i’m not hurting myself. Just writing out some feelings. You’re sweet.

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I like your poem a lot.

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You are too! No… I’m an evil person and selfish. But thank you… Lol judging others wjen I’m literally an ■■■■■■■ so your calling my super ficial non productive self absorbed ass sweet really makes me think of what a ■■■■■ I really am. Thank you. Lol…

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I see you are a little awkward when taking a compliment. lol.

p.s. I’m evil and self absorbed too

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