'On the fly' poetry challenge

This is a poem I am writing on the fly based on a song called ‘Beyond her tomb’

I rise again like a phoenix
I am reborn
I have come back
as an alicorn.

After I was set ablaze,
Remembering my life
looking for the brighter days,
I heard a voice,
the voice of Celestia.

She told me:
“Carrot Top,
You have done well.
Now that you have shed your earth pony body,
It’s time for you to fulfill your true destiny.”

Now I am sitting beside the princesses in the castle,
all thanks to everypony that hated me.

I find the song I based this off of inspiring. I feel as though the song speaks directly to me. The reason for this is because people hate me. What this poem says is if you endure the hatred, whatever hardships you may be dealt, you’ll be rewarded accordingly.

Here is the challenge: You have to write this ON THE FLY! no thinking it over an hour before, just write >:3

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i was born without a creative cortex. i can remember something for you pretty well though.

Okay, bring it on :slight_smile:

lol ok maybe not as good as i thought

okay then, that’s alright XD

Still in the early am for me so think I’ll have to pass. But was something like that they did in the hospital OT program for writing. Pretty much just play some random music and just write the words that come into your head with the rhythm of the music. I found it really helped with my flow in writing and something I still use. Unfortunately most of my writing tends to get a bit dark so can’t post here but I find it very therapeutic sometimes to just get it all out. Anyway loved your poem and looking forward to others contributions.

Thank you, @Dreamscape.

“There’s a lady who’s sure,
All that glitters is gold”.
And she’s…

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On top of spaghetti,
All covered with cheese,
I lost my poor meatball,
When somebody sneezed.

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@77nick77 @igor Those are awesome, guys! And I remember that song, @igor.

Mind filled with delusion
A never ending illusion
What isn’t there is all one stares
Reality or fake, what is at stake?

Just something I came up with in about 30 seconds.

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Hut one hut 2 I need a Charleston Chew

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buying a stairway to heaven
And when she gets there she knows if the stores are closed
With a word she can get what she came for


Good song

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It rolled off the table,
And on to the floor,
And even rolled out,
The ■■■■■■■ back door.

LOL.

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XD LOL awesome!

Beautiful. love it.

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There was a time I called myself Pony.
On a dime the weather changed - more morbid than deranged
I became. In my room when storms were ranging I became.

Downstairs supper smells came up
down stairs to familiar to walk. I ceased to talk

Now I walk. I talk. I chat.hat.hat.
See me now behind a window . sindow. Turn me around,
I donot dance. Donut dance. Chance
flies by like a bird. Heard it? Heard it? it says

Herd of sheep herd of deer an antler
stuck in by ear an ugly lady on a fat chair
but you know how it goes on + on + on…

Pawn it Pawn it - No I’ll hang it here on a chain
around my neck Heck - she’s at it again. The end.

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Glad you like my little ditty, with an igor twist.

Okay, okay, I am compelled to do one more:

There once was a man named Cass
Whose balls were made of brass
In stormy weather, they clanged together,
And lightning shot out of his ass!

Meaning of life
Living with meaning
Living with reason
Reason of living
the meaning of life