I think my songs flow almost too well because I rhyme everything. The “null” is a filler line that rhymes with nothing. I sound too much like dr Seuss. My enemy was saying “YOU EMPHASIZE EVERY LINE TOO MUCH”. Well I’m a very flexible adaptive person so I’m gonna try to take his advice even though I hate the kid and he’s rude as F. And try to not be so emphatic. I was listening to famous people and they sometimes use lines that don’t necessarily rhyme. So I’m gonna try. See how it goes.
do this…a b a b a c a c a d a d a e …ect at first try to use -tion ending words for your a… and try to go with multisyllabic rhymes for the bb cc dd ee pairs…
i totally just made that up so i could post something…
Well I’m gonna do what seems natural, I just used the “null” thing as an example. But I like what u say. I use multisyllabic rhymes often as well. When I do AB AB it’s sometimes even ABC ABC because the first ABC is one sentence, then the second ABC is the next sentence
like yesterday I did
my eyes burn like a firey pit
the skies turn like im aspiring ■■■■
well that was actually ABCD ABCD
but I need more filler lines to make it flow less precise…hold on bbl with a song with my new technique
I’m starting to think there’s nothing wrong with my rhymes (progression over time) and my enemy was just being a hater like he always is because hes a very bitter envious person
I like this verse I wrote yesterday
i spit another
ever since i became a brother
because my mother
gave birth to another
my sister
she married, but to not a rich dude
she rejected that pitch from that other rude ass
mood gassed
lewd assed
crude, and she passed
on that
my bro in law the man
with a plan
to help me turn myself better, ever, since it began
first time i met him he gave me my snapback fitted
now im wearin that fresh as i spit it
on my mental temple
and those drugs were detrimental
i cant say it was accidental
more like experimeental
coincidental
i felt they were developmental
but it wasnt til i got sentimental
that i started to resemble
something gentle
but im monumental
when i spit over these instrumentals
now im becoming transcendental
and i meant to
I like your old songs and this new one. I think he was biggin’ himself up by putting you down. But that’s what normies do these days! It isn’t hate, just validation. Competition. Rip him a new one. Teach him something new. From the esophagus of chew through the vibrating ether; a Chinese whisper, caught in the wind like a bitch-slap from a cactus, heading for his noggin with a decibel warning written on it.