My song eyes of bach

İ just uploaded to you tube but i wrote this song in australia in 2011.

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Hey that’s beautiful :relaxed:

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You mean uploaded?

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Yes sorry uploaded.i m not good with computer terms

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And this is my second song.i wrote it in australia in 2011 too

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Hmm. . .

Nice Technique. But!, It The Strings Sound Worn And Thin. Which May Seem Like A Strange Observation. But!, It Takes Away From The Intended Melody In A Way.

Maybe A Slight Deeper Tone To Get Your Point Across. . .

Talking About The ‘Bach’ One. . .

I Dunno.

Still Sounds Unique In A Sense.

Which Is A Good Thing. . .

~P.s. Hope, Trust, True Love, Honesty, Joy, And Endlessly Eternal Peace!.~ :owl: :spider_web: :owl:

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Thanks @ATARI .i really appreciate your comments because you are really fantastic poet

Hmm. . .

Not Really.

Jus Bored.

~P.s. Hope, Trust, True Love, Honesty, Joy, And Endlessly Eternal Peace!.~ :owl: :spider_web: :owl:

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