I started writing this song earlier. Just had the urge to write about my break up, never wrote a break up song before, and the guitar riff just came out of me sporadically. Not finished but I’m a roadblock with words. What do you think?
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How long have you played guitar for?
15 years now, but not super consistently.
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I really like the guitar riff if that’s the right terminology.
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It is, thank you so much 
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Your voice sounds like the lead singer for Smashing Pumpkins. 
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Oh wow really? That’s a HUGE compliment!
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You have an eerie voice, fits the song really well. Like wistful
Cool stuff, love all the great songs here lately!
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Right on, can’t wait to hear it finished. Nice vocal, man
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Ah thanks! I don’t feel like i sing well but I don’t really care anymore, i enjoy it plus it’s hard finding dedicated musicians anyway
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Nobody likes their own voice lol. I love the chord pattern too
I can really hear some female backgrounds on there
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Sounds great. Your voice is clear but it has insecurity. Practice more that is one your talents.
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Voice out of tune.
Guitar too.
But has something charming.
Like spontaneous garage jamming.
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Don’t lose your vulnerability though. It’s what makes the song Beautiful
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I like the lyrics. I can’t write lyrics to save my life. Nice guitar riff.
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Out of tune is more punk rock tbh
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