Long Poem: Time

A long time ago
In a land far far away

There was the person
I should have married

Hidden amongst all the
Other ordinary people

Only finally becoming visible
With the eye glasses of time

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so nice
this remembering me with those who i had loved so much
but i didnt manage to marry them
btw on my room
i m writing her name with very very big letters
but with alphabets of korean language
so i practise my freedom very big freedom with no embarrassments at all
i am expressing my love really
i dont like the embarrassments at all
but i did what i love and expressing my love with so much freedom
i feel great with what i did really

yacmin

omg i wrote her name wrongly

so i wrote her name again yassmin

then i wrote this

this like enagagement rings or marriage rings :heart: :heart: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

between me and her it is really amazing imagination and i expressed all whats inside me so freely

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i updated my post :))))

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Not much of a poem. Doesn’t rhyme.

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Sorry @everhopeful

I think your poems are great really. Your very talented.

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Time and time ago. I once had a friend, don’t you know. You said.
He’d be around all the time. He never.
Said Goodbye. So where is he now? I wonder today. What time loses transaction. For those who don’t stay. I miss you.
Daniel. Wherever you are.

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