I like what I did with this poem/song

Creativity
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https://soundcloud.com/jonjames1/gotta-go-thru-hell-to-get-to-heaven-1?in=jonjames1/sets/strange-faces

I made it a little darker

I took out the end part

It’s really dark. And then it transitions into a happy song right after it. It’s pretty cool.

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Your most interesting one to date!

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This ones about my experiences with drugs but it’s creative

https://soundcloud.com/jonjames1/trip-of-a-lifetime

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your voice Jon, so clear and good. many lose it, Julie Andrews (the best) Shania Twain,
others,

young is where you need to do it. Never knew the future, and you don’t so, as they say,
before you lose it, baby.

Love your voice, but wanna make you scream, haha, or jam. I know it’s not right context.

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