Made a cool song

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Slight tw

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@GoldenRex @cigarino @Aziz @anon9798425 @PinCushion @Leaf @anon90843118 @Chess24 @anon4362788 @Mary2

What do you guys think of this effort

Constructive criticism

Do I need to tone it down a lil

I tagged ten of you who I don’t think would be triggered by this

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I’m not in a place where I can listen to music right now. I’ll listen to it in the morning and let you know what I think.

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Yea that one is better than the others because you didn’t raise your voice too much. I am being honest that it doesn’t sound too good when you raise your voice too much. Some are able to raise their voice high while maintaining quality while some can’t. Personally my voice sucks at all volumes and also I don’t even have the ability nor the motivation to make songs.

Its good that you have motivation and the ability to sing and make good songs. Keep it up :+1:

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Sorry about that @Leaf you’re good

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I changed my mastering auto mix a lot and it allows me to bring out my more natural voice

I feel if I took out the stupid end part it would be better

I’m in a better head space rn

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Sometimes maybe it’s my sick mind but I say triggering things. Some of it is fine but others is too much. But I’m getting better and better about it

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You’re a really good dude @Aziz

Glad to have ya here!!

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Who’s the guy from Finland who makes music. I still wanna make a song with him but I wasn’t feeling myself when he sent me that last beat.

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You mean @zwolfgang?

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No he lives in Sweden. I’ve made plenty of songs with wolf

He’s a native Estonian/Finnish. He makes metal and rap. I thought his music is cool af

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@Loke @everhopeful @Wave

What do you guys think

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@far_cry0 when youre around check out my song

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Smooth flow!
I like it! @Jonnybegood

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Yeah smooth flow I think tomorrow I’ll write one with much more appropriate lyrics but just as good flow. Love ya wave !! No I’m not on ecstasy lol. I am ecstasy Peace

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Sounds very natural. But yeah, lots of drug references so triggering for some I imagine !

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At least some were fair like saying cocaine was with the devil.

The sexual thing at the end I’m least happy with myself but I’ve gone too far now to take it out

If I put it on YouTube I’d take it out

Thanks everhopeful

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I think you’re thinking of @Heigen5

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Thank you yup that’s him I hope he sees this thread lol. I couldn’t remember his name to save the life of me lol

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Impeccable rhythm. The subject matter is a little depressing.

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