I know the singing isn’t great, I’m not a singer, but I like to get my ideas recorded anyway
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Guitar sounds great,but it seems that when you are singing,kinda restrain your voice,just doesnt let it grow?
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Im not a great singer either but I love doing it its a ton of fun! I think your voice has potential, you just need to practice
Great job on the guitar too you play very well 
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It’s a great song. Nice lyrics. Did you and your fiancée break up? So sorry 
@zwolfgang is right. You are a good guitar player
I can sing but I can’t write a song to save my life
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We did, she became physically abusive last week so I left her immediately
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That’s good you left her. It took my sister 20 years to finally leave her abusive husband.
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I like it! I get the impression that you are moving on, from the song.
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Precisely! 
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Great guitar @Moon! Good lyrics. Just polish up the vocals a bit and it’ll be great.
A diamond in the rough.
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