A Poem: People

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People depend on you
Even though you have schizophrenia,
Just mother nature’s way
Of keeping herself amused.

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I like how you’re able to say a lot in just four lines. Really good!

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My pain is not amusing to me.

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Treat schizophrenia depend on you
Even people have treating you ,
by meds or speech .
Just mother nature’s logic
of keeping herself understood

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Cool poem @everhopeful!

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i agree 7658765658

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we should make a poem 1 line at a time each person contributing 1 line until we hit like 16

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People depend on you
Even though you have schizophrenia,
Just mother nature’s way
Of keeping herself amused.
My pain is not amusing to me.

Treat schizophrenia depend on you
Even people have treating you ,
by meds or speech .
Just mother nature’s logic
of keeping herself understood

understood and found
lines written down
ever profound, in sound and time
finding art within this schizophrenia of a mind

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