Short poem: While sitting on the crescent moon

While sitting on the crescent moon
waiting just the time to pass
watching to the future, seeing things
maybe others do not see
the life is for living
new experiences, new people
the new world is coming, new realities
flying like a moon rocket
while sitting on the crescent moon

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Nice poem, with a matching avatar too! :slight_smile:

cool

I would change some of those ‘the’s’ to ‘a’s’

for example it couldn’t be ‘the crescent moon’

because that assumes it exists all the time

‘a crescent moon’ means it happens rarely

I know right. I was just about to mention that.

Nice poem.
I really liked it! :slightly_smiling_face:

It is funny how true this poem is … all these world leaders are talking about a new world coming … funny

I re-edited a rap to be about the moon.

wow, I just got a severe moment of deja vu…