Poets poem

I wrote this short poem today



It’s beginning.
I always knew some day God would call me.
But I never thought it would be today.
Today marks the beginning of something new.
Something good.
I’m not sure if I’m ready or even worthy.
But one thing is sure;
A new phase begins.
A new phase.
Today.

A new phase.
Today.

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I hope whatever changes are coming in your life (based on the poem) are beneficial to you.

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I told myself when I was young. Then when God talks to me, I will seek mental health help. And then that day came. So I did. And now I don’t have that voice pestering me. I’ve often wondered about Joan. Of. Arc.

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Me too. I still get messages from God, but I report them to my pdoc.

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lol thanks … its not really a poem to be honest or a statement on my life. i wrote it for an intro for a song. its a story…coming soon.

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Oh ok. Are you going to share it with us when you’re done?

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YUP will be done soon. still working on it :slight_smile: i may share a snippit today because im so excited about it :stuck_out_tongue:

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Nice one man… I’m guess your in good spirits :smirk:

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Tag me if you post it :slight_smile:

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I don’t read much poetry but I really like a French poem called The sleeper in the valley by Arthur Rimbaud.

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ok will do :slight_smile: thanks for asking about it i appreciate it, means a lot :smiley:

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@LilyoftheValley I know i should wait until its done to post it but im really excited about this song :stuck_out_tongue: i just wanna share it now so here it is :slight_smile: … you can hear the “poem” at the beginning… really just a piece of creative writing

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thanks dude lol just some creative writing

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Soon as I’m done with this little part of my project I’m gonna check’em out :smile:

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Excellent!!! I especially like the voice in it and would like to hear more of that periodically throughout the song. Thats just me though. Good job!

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Cool man! 738338

Ayy thank you so much!! And I really appreciate the comment. That’s a great idea. I’ll try to see if I can do that.
Hmm

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I mean new additional words not the exact same ones necessarily

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Yup! There’s a second half to the conclusion. I already wrote it. The end is not fixed yet. It will loop back around at some point to the arp that was at the beginning and at that point ill add in the second half of the speech.

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Cool! Looking forward to hearing it!

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