I don’t know how I should feel
I don’t get the ‘appeal’
Like why am I drawn into
Something that
I can’t fully feel
Something feels off
Like kinda rough on my heart
Shredding it apart
At the edges.
Need a solution.
This is too much air pollution
In my mind,
And in my heart
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Wow I’m pretty proud of this poem.
I have never tried to write poetry before.
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Maybe you wanna try once? It’s nice to get thoughts on paper.
Up to you of course 
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I don’t think I would be any good at it.
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I think you would be 
But yea up to you
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I have tried to write songs on guitar before, so I guess that is similar. But even then it wasn’t very good.
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I’ve never read a not good poem on here before.
What makes what you wrote not good?
Maybe you are just being too hard on yourself, idk.
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I don’t know, just not very poetic I guess.
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