I made a song, could use honest feedback

I made it 6 months ago. Some people irl say it’s pretty okay for a first attempt. But I want to know from strangers. Is it ■■■■? Please be honest, it won’t hurt me to hear that it’s bad. Thanks.

I already know it’s bad reciting, mainly I’m unsure of the lyrics.

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I like it, but the beat is too loud I can barely hear you.

You’ve got a really nice sounding voice and good rhythm.

You’re talented!

Hang on, I just read that was your first attempt! That’s impressive!

I think you’d do well, get it out there. Your voice is great. I’d listen to your album.

(PS, I actually like hip hop so I’m not just blowing smoke up your ass)

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I like ur voice my man bitumin …!!!

It’s a great voice isn’t it?

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Hi turtle are u home now or still at job …!!!

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I’m at home, it’s 7.09pm Friday night. I only work part time Monday throught to Thursday so I have Friday’s off to relax.

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Who cooks dinner for u …ur husband or u …?? Have a good night sleep after dinner hahah…!!!

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Well on nights that I have work through the day Mr Turtle normally cooks.

He starts work at 4am and finished at 12 midday so he has the afternoon to prepare dinner. Which is fair.

I get home from work around 5pm. Sometimes I cook pasta when I get home from work because Mr Turtle won’t cook pasta. But that’s a very easy dish for me to make so I don’t mind.

My favourite thing that he cooks is chilli con carne. I eat it with corn chips.

How are you @far_cry0? Do you do much cooking?

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Can you post the lyrics for me?

Hi sister turtle … as i am low functioning szphernic … i have a lot of negative symptoms …now i am fighting with avolition …so i am now motivated to cook myself atleast…i want to spend my days atleast being productive…

I am also looking for low stress janitoring and cleaning job… it should be parttime i can only manage 3 to 4 hrs a day…

You’ll get there, have faith. keep at it.

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