Eternal Times (Floetry)

https://soundcloud.com/jonjames1/eternal-times

Life is but an empty dream
So I take a knife and prove im mean
Prove im green
in the face
when i misplace
a taste
of my haste
misplace a pill
and i got these voices in my head
they make the choices to leave me dead
and im still
still this crazy
still this gravy
and im makin beautiful music like some daisies
like some flowers
and im at bat like casey
just floatin, like the navy
but im jokin, u couldnt pay me
to spit a realer
iller
song
because yesterday i stared at a lifeless pond
i fantasize of samourie
swords
i fantasize that im the lord
ever since i got messed up in the gourd
when i was young i was just so damn bored
all the time
so i started to absorb that liquor it makes me sicker
but im feelin fine.
from the bottle
cuz i met a girl who on the side was a model
may have been part of her ego
cuz she thought she was a hero
when really though
she aint more than an off broadway show
ohwell
dont dwell
ever since i became swell
like some waves
and oh behave
my lady
because they aint even pay me
yet

A thing of beauty is a joy for ever:
i bring the duty that i destroy a feather
for flying
because im lying
but these flocks of birds keep trying
to jump out of the nest
but not yet
because they aint red
ee
but im so steady
with the stanzaz
spitting it
never kidding with ■■■■
im just a noble creature
ever since i was sober i became a seeker
because im deeper
in the mind
deeper, in the ocean
and im flowing with that notion
flowin with that figure
ever since i pulled the frigging trigger
on the gun
left u dead like the last man who thought he was the chosen one
but ill be frozen in my ice
it wont be stolen from my life
because i bring this journal
for eternal
times
spittin it
well im tryin

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Wow, just the lyrics alone! Great!

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ya it was half a poem, half a rap

came out pretty well thanks

and I love the beat

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The ending is the best part but it sounds like my phone is ringing, when it clearly didn’t ring…weird!

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Strange because on audacity the phone ring sound doesn’t show up…wth…it shows up on soundcluod though

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that’s nice rhyme and flow

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that was beautiful sirboring thanks for sharing

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lol it is okay. your floetry reminded me of it.

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was my favorite part!

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the more times I listen to a song the more times I see the flaws in it…

it should read

it flows much better and is better

ill probably re-do every song I ever made so far sometime soon

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