All the dreams that amount to gehenna whirl in my mind as a snowblind wind

All the dreams that amount to gehenna whirl in my mind as a snowblind wind. All the dreams that count as sent still deny the rivers fire in my chest of zen. I’ve always spoke the river and offered flames of choirs. til the last days of my derived wisdom I’ll lie for the purpose in your fire

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the admin shortened it i think

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Have you tried a page length writing like this. Or hey, 6 pages - ?

No but I’ve thought of writing a book like this

I was hoping this was gonna be a music vid, but still a nice read.

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I can imagine reading a story. I’m not sure a whole book would hold together. Maybe -

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