If you post it here----->delete it on soundcloud-------->re-post it on soundcloud under the same name…it will say “track is missing” on discourse.
But this is amazing!!! I listened to a song by Logic who I think is pretty good, then I listened to mine and mine was better
I’ll post the lyrics so you can follow along if u want
https://soundcloud.com/jonjames1
Listen to Jazz Jew From The New Schoo
This that funky jazz
and i got that razzle-dazz
so just relax
and listen to this chap
flowin over the sax
made out of brass
and i got so much class
well maybe not
i look like ive been fought
a hundred times
snorted a hundred lines
of ketamine
and dmt
but you know me
i spit is so sarcastically
with this creativity
fiction brings friction
to the way im kickin
in the mix and
things
as i wing
im the man to become a king
ever since i was a young ass thing
a young ass person
murkin
stanzas
im bananas
nuts
make cuts
at my wrists
and i got a cyst
a wound
an injury
connecting like some synergy
got so much energy
to keep flowin
for that reason im goin
to the top
and i ever gonna stop
aint ever gonna drop
til they pop
a bullet
in my mullet
i say cool it
u dont rule ■■■■
maybe ill see u in rehab
ya right, why are u so mad
because u actin
like what im lackin
is what im not doin
even though i stay pursueing
my ensueing
wrongdoing
im trying to corrupt these kids
im trying to abduct them from their cribs
and get their minds going to ■■■■
nah im just playin mr. and mrs. brown
im trying to encourage your kid to the crown
im just using my sounds
to change up this town
i aint trying to change one person
im just trying to change the earth and
everything from pole to pole
cuz i got so much rhythm, so much soul
im on a roll now
im on the road right now
pickity pat wow
u hear my sound
and i murk it
til the end of all my verses
i put on a nina simone vinyl
im feeling good from my spinal to my final fiber
hope this track gets me a couple more subscribers
cuz im a rider
always been an outsider
im liable
now
its advisible
now
for me to cool it down
for me not be so damn fire
hip hop, im gettin tired
but i stay inspired
because ive required
the feeling of being admired
ever since the day i got hired
ever since i graduated top of my class
and call me hugh glass
cuz im the revenant
im heaven sent
got the regiment
and its so eminent
call this the covenant
but im lovin it
cuz ive risen ■■■■
like jesus did
back in 33 AD
■■■■ it, i dont need no lady
but im shady
like slim
never dim
when i bring the grim
and the gripe
the thing
and i write
verses
got that gypsy flow but i dont need no curses
but ■■■■ it
clickity clack
never wickity wack
but im comin back on the track
spittin it when the night turns black
peace