Poem: Reflection

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What? You think I don’t Bleed, too?
I feel raw and broken
The Mirror has been Shattered
And in every Reflection, stands You

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Very good poem, i don’t know if it is because it reflects something i feel too, but i really like “i feel raw and broken” - there is an ambiguity present. How can anything raw be broken etc,

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Thanks @bluebutterfly glad to hear you can relate. And to answer your question, if someone beat you with a baseball bat, you would feel both raw and broken

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That’s depressingly beautiful

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Beautiful, no GOAT imagery :raised_hands::raised_hands::raised_hands::raised_hands:

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