New song idea

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These are just ideas that will turn into full songs if there’s good feedback. I’m recording on an iPhone so quality isn’t the best but I’m working with what I’ve got. https://soundcloud.com/user-437525208/no-name-number-two

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I like it! The guitar part sounds nice and the melody on your vocals is on point. You should turn it into a full song.

Edit: I like the lyrics as well.

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Does anyone know how to embed soundcloud links?I’ve done it before but apparently forgot

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Thanks man. You’re stuffs good too. I listened to it a while back I think.

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I like it… personally, I could imagine it on a Radiohead Album

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That’s such a huge compliment. Radiohead’s my favorite band haha.

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Man I feel this in my soul. You know you’ve got a good song when it resonates with your listeners. Maybe I’m just biased lol anyways I also like your vocal melodies a whole lot too! I say definitely make a full song of this!

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I like it too @themooniesareup.

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Just checked out some of your stuff on soundcloud. Enjoyed what i heard, especially “Jazz for Jimi”.

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Thank you for listening. I want to write to that eventually.

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Really good. 15151515

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Thank you!

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If you are interested, check out my post, “Songs I wrote after I became ill” under creativity. Or just check out Trash Martyr on the Reverb Nation website @themooniesareup and @SpacemanInvader.

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I just checked out a couple of songs. I love the one called “puppet”. I saved your page to my reading list so i’ll check out more later. You’re really good at what you do!

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Thanks so much for taking the time to check it out and post feedback. I will also listen to your music more in depth when I get the chance. Nice to hear from others who have been thru symptoms similar to mine.

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nice guitar. 151515

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You have a beautiful voice. The song is so sad.

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On my way home from school. I’ll listen in a bit.

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I like your songs. When were they written?

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The first three were written and recorded around 2007, although it’s an approximate date. I was really bad off when i did those, psychosis and heavy drugs. The others were around 2000-2002, not as psychotic, but going through other issues. Some were written before that, but all of them were after my initial symptoms surfaced around '93. Thanks for listening and your kind feedback.