A very short poem

No tears, just pain
thoughts revolving,no brain
no value, self deceit
never whole,never complete.


pretty good, imo.

post must be 20 chars long.

loved it :slight_smile:

i started writing very short poems at first too, good poem.

Shorter poem. It’s titled :


            Adam had'em.

bombs are made,
times has changed.
what we had we lost,
and what we lost we remember,
what we remember we have forever.

Pedro 23-11-2013

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