No tears, just pain
thoughts revolving,no brain
no value, self deceit
never whole,never complete.
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pretty good, imo.
post must be 20 chars long.
loved it 
i started writing very short poems at first too, good poem.
Shorter poem. It’s titled :
'Fleas'
Adam had'em.bombs are made,
times has changed.
what we had we lost,
and what we lost we remember,
what we remember we have forever.
Pedro 23-11-2013
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