A song /poem about revision in life

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As the ocean in your dream revise the skies of deceived you are the fire.
As all I’ve believed by winds in sins am redeemed I am the fire.
I really don’t care if the stars fall from my highest call of the gut.
I really don’t care if the nights are all left to me til the brightest of the sun…

This is the day!
Every little bit of may is in the ways she prays
For the suns to guide you

As the river develops the winds to my opening eyes you are the fire…
As a wisdom of the peaceful of genuine meaning find we are the fire
I will be silent until I’m a soul dreaming another dream or maybe she’s bold as love.
I will never lie where I’ve only tried as Best to be bold, but better be the fire as one

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good to see you.

you, I, and then got to ‘we’

like it a lot.

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Ty @Daze I appreciate it

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what does the fire represent, here?

It can be many things.

I almost don’t want to know what you meant,
cuz I’m thinking of my own painting of fire,

a bird in the fire.

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The fire is the essence of a spirit

ere is a slight revision

As the ocean in your dream revise the skies of deceived you are the fire.
As all I’ve believed by winds in sins, am redeemed, I am the fire.
I really don’t care if the stars fall from my highest call of orion.
I really don’t care if the nights are all left to me til the brightest of love…

This is the day!
Every little bit of may is in the ways she prays
For the suns to guide you

As the river develops the winds to my opening eyes you are the fire…
As a wisdom of the peaceful of genuine meaning find we are the fire
I will be silent until I’m a soul dreaming another dream or maybe she’s bold as love.
I will never lie where I’ve only tried as Best to be bold, but better be the fire as one

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The fire is the essence of the universe spirit. sorry, my signal comesand goes

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Ya know what’s funny is I used to speak to people like this as a kid lol

They didn’t know what to think haha

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ha, yeah, I’ve turned in essay questions like this,

but it was poetry class, I called it Poetry for Poetry.

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