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Creativity
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I AM IN YOU, The pill that explodes, that kills and then cures you, then becomes you. I am you. I AM IN YOU, The shadows of onions, Your double your angel, I became you, I am you. I AM IN YOU, The blessed and the holy, The burned and the damned, Under the curse for you, Because I love you, I AM IN YOU,The image of all things is hidden inside you, Find that which is in you, and you’ll find peace and eternal life. -AND DNA-

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I like the hyperbole and grandiloquence. You sound like Wm Blake, dude. Keep it up!

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Thanks. I thought I’d try something not written in antiseptic tarantula. Glad you liked it.

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Indeed. You do well in free verse.

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Also minds me of Whitman, who blurs the edges of his identity.

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Thanks man. I appreciate you making a Whitman association most especially. For me, it’s a compulsion of sorts. I find being inspired by any random thing rather than nothing at all is preferable to anhedonia. Again, thanks for the kind words.

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Sorry to hear about the no-pleasure. You’re welcome, of course. I’m working up to posting another one, about the “Freedom Fighters.” But I’ll take my time.

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I like the idea of the double

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