Sweep me away a poem


#1

I stand a sliver of my former self
I’ve been swept away
trait by trait
talent by talent
splinter by splinter
All taken by the sea
Waves of this illness
That sweep me away


#2

This is beautiful. I’m sorry you’re hurting.


#3

Thank you, I’m not really hurting, just wanted to write. I’m finding it a good release valve these days.


#4

Me too! I’ve been writing short stories about Mr. Star and I, and our fictional adopted daughter who has super powers. He loves them. It’s a good way to channel my baby fever.


#5

The days are getting colder
I am getting older ( :smile:)
How scary it is to think
That one day I’m just gonna be gone
I need to live my life