Added a plot device ive never seen before. All of the alt versions of the main char from different dimensions…are connected in their heads…and can jump in on the narrative at any point for whatever reason…
I start with boring exposition and another version jumps in and tells the narrator to shut up with the back story their trying to watch utube. 4th and or 5th dimensional 4th wall breaks lol… i hope i can stick with this… it may be too dam random…