Song (WIP)

The into and verses are not done but I’m wondering if the piano in the chorus is too much ? I really like it but it still feels like I’m doing too much…is this just in my mind ?

@ThePoet @dreamer54 @labratmat @broken @magz @Wave

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I enjoyed it and it is a really happy and mellow tune.

The chorus isn’t too much for me.

I’d like to be able to play the real guitar as well as you play your midi though :smiley:

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I don’t feel that. My only objection is for you learning how to play a real sax lol. That would be sick tbh…

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you kinda look like gigachad

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Bro I look like dog poop compared to that guy :rofl:

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Ok cool man!! I guess I will go with the current version then.

Also …I’m down if you want to do the guitar part? I can send the midi file :grinning:

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I’d like to record some music but i just don’t feel i have the space for it in my small flat.

It is a hassle moving gear to my bedroom when my guitars and amp is in my lounge and it is just too cramped to be bothered to do it.

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I think it sounds great the way it is @AKendrick
Really beautiful stuff!

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No, I meant that I’d like to be able to play the guitar as good as you play it on your midi.

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I like it! Got a nice vibe. :pray: :+1:

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Cool cool ! I’m gonna go with that version then .

Also… bro I’m broke as hell :sob: as soon as I get the money I’m buying that sax!!

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Oh gotcha lol sorry i got a little thirsty :sweat_smile:

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Dude this one sounds super cool! I like the interplay between the two horns and also it sounds very full. Great work!

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Thanks bro … that means a lot :grin:

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Im almost don with the verses. What do you guys think??? honest opinion if you hear something that sounds bad lmk because i think getting feedback saved this song. I was about to redo the piano until you guys said iyt sounded ok then when i went back it was good.

The verses are supposed to be done but feel off to me. is this just in my head?

@ThePoet @dreamer54 @labratmat @broken @magz @Wave @TheCanuk

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I like it man! Thanks for sharing.

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I really like the harmony at around 2.32 onwards for a few seconds. Loved how it reached a crescendo there.

Perhaps another track with some of that on it would be awesome too.

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Listened to the whole thing and I like it. Will re-listen later with a more critical ear, but overall really good vibe!

I remember you said everything is synth?

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I think it’s good for the genre however I’m more of a metal head when it comes too instrumental BUT I found it calming a bit like a Rachel platten song which I also like but your talented no denying that even the biggest metal head in the world would probably agree

Redneck stomp by obituary is a good song too it might give you a good idea for making fast paced instrumental idk it’s good just not my thing

Its good. nice jazzy tune.

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